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This excerpt is from my fantasy/futuristic WIP. I’m currently just calling it by the MC’s name, Hannah.
*****
Yuen Li knelt beside her. “Open your legs for me,” he directed in a low voice. “I will arouse you a bit first to ease my way, then I will run my fingers over your opening to test your maidenhood.”
Hesitantly, she let her legs fall open. Her thigh muscles relaxed, freed of the restrictive pose she’d been holding. Relief eased tension from her spine as Yuen Li’s warm palm slid over her thigh.
He eased his hand between her legs. Shock whipped through her. Though she’d known what he intended, it was still a struggle to keep her thighs open and allow his intimate exploration.
Gently, he parted the bare, pillowy lips of her womanhood before sliding a finger over her still-dewed flesh to open the delicate inner folds. Pleasure hummed through her, the earlier attentions of the bathing girls preparing the way for the eunuch’s ministrations. Feather light touches teased the opening to her body as he tested her readiness. The tip of his middle finger eased into her, running along the rim of the opening.
Shock combined with a thrill of pleasure at the first sensation of near-penetration. Hannah fought competing urges to slam her legs together and to push her hips forward. She bit her lip to hold back a whimper as he drew his fingers back to slide over her dampened flesh. The urge to recapture that finger, to deepen the penetration, surprised her.
Yuen Li leaned into her, pressing his lips to the juncture of her neck and shoulder. His open mouth dragged along the tendon, setting off sparks of arousal. Her nipples hardened painfully and she felt him smile against her skin. She knew from the heat rising in her cheeks she was blushing.
Eyes drifting shut, Hannah listened to the other virgins. Panicked whimpers, luxurious sighs, low moans filled the room. The sounds added another layer of sensuality to her arousal.
He pressed his finger back into her, a little deeper this time. Slowly, he rocked his finger in and out, a soft rhythm that moved him across the resistant flesh at her entrance.
Hannah’s breath sighed out as he eased her open and pressed the heel of his palm to her clitoris. Heat rushed through her and she felt the slickness that suddenly eased his way.
“Ah,” he said softly, sliding his hand free. “I am so pleased with you.”
Her eyes flew open as he straightened away from her. Oddly bereft without his touch, it took Hannah a moment to regain her sense of place. She shifted in the chair, abruptly aware of her exposure.
“No, don’t close your legs, shaila,” he murmured.
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Holy cow! What is going on there??? Let’s just say I am very intrigued.
Comment by evie byrne — July 13, 2009 #
Great excerpt, Elise!
Comment by Stephanie Adkins — July 13, 2009 #
Wow – this definitely has my attention. What’s she doing there? And how’s it going to end?
Comment by Crista — July 13, 2009 #
Nice slow, steamy build there. And so many questions! Is he the hero? Is he really a eunuch?
Comment by Jeannie Lin — July 13, 2009 #
That was a fabulous excerpt.
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