Thursday Thirteen – Pimpin’ the Release Version

December 3, 2009 on 12:01 am | In Elise | 16 Comments

Next week – on Monday Dec 7 – we have a new release. This Fire is the first published joint project by Emily and myself, and it’s paired with Ella Drake’s story Firestorm on E’Terra for the December Hearts Afire anthology from Liquid Silver Books. So this Thursday, I thought I’d give you a little peek.  An excerpt of 13 lines from This Fire:

Eden Thomas had never given much thought to romantic relationships – until Seth Ripley. But Eden has secrets she won’t tell, and soon Seth’s demands for the truth push Eden into a corner – betray her best friend or watch Seth walk away.

1-13.

A fog crept in off the river, isolating them and making the canal seem almost surreal.

Eden began to relax. She was pleasantly surprised to find she could relax around him. The rhythmic sound of the water, the distant sounds of traffic muffled by fog, and the mellow pace Seth set for their walk combined to ease the sexual tension she felt between them.

“What made you decide to transfer to Alexandria?” She asked, glancing up at his profile.

His jaw tightened and relaxed, so quickly she decided she’d imagined the tension. His tone, when he answered, was easy and relaxed. “I graduated from Georgetown and spent a lot of time driving back and forth between D.C. and Philadelphia, where my parents are, when I was in college. I like D.C.”

“Don’t you miss the cheese steaks?”

He snorted quietly. “Sacrifices had to be made.”


I hope that whets your appetite. Just a few more days and you can have the whole enchilada.

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  1. Or the whole cheese steak.

    Comment by Emily Ryan-Davis — December 3, 2009 #

  2. Oooo…nice snippet!

    Comment by Heather — December 3, 2009 #

  3. Congrats on your upcoming release. I love the last line.

    Comment by Shelley Munro — December 3, 2009 #

  4. I agree with Shelley – that’s a great place to leave off in a teaser. It really shows us the character and sets the tone. :)

    Comment by MsMenozzi — December 3, 2009 #

  5. Sounds great! I wish you a ton of sales! Happy Thursday! *Hugs*

    Comment by Stephanie Adkins — December 3, 2009 #

  6. Very intriguing peek inside. Wishing you Many Sales. Happy T13!

    Comment by Adelle Laudan — December 3, 2009 #

  7. Sounds great! Congratulations on the new release!

    *hugs*
    Paige

    My TT is at http://paigetylertheauthor.blogspot.com/

    Comment by Paige Tyler — December 3, 2009 #

  8. Sacrifices, indeed!
    Can’t wait for release day!

    Comment by Ella Drake — December 3, 2009 #

  9. Wow, that landed on 13 perfectly! Did you have to modify it at all? This is a really nice pimping TT. I’m going to do mine the same when my book comes out.

    Comment by Alice Audrey — December 3, 2009 #

  10. Very nice flow, looking forward to reading it!

    Comment by Inez Kelley — December 3, 2009 #

  11. It was Em’s idea – the idea of using 13 lines as an excerpt. I thieved it. You’ll see hers next week.

    But, no, I didn’t have to modify it at all. I did, however, do some hunting to find a place where 13 lines made a good excerpt.

    Comment by Elise Logan — December 3, 2009 #

  12. oooh! Wowsers, look forward to it!

    Comment by A. Catherine Noon — December 3, 2009 #

  13. Brilliant! And enticing. You’re inspiring for someone new to both blogging and writing. Not to mention a delight for us readers! Thank you for sharing this tease.

    Comment by Darla — December 3, 2009 #

  14. YAY! Congrats on the release. Great little snippet.

    Comment by Jennifer Leeland — December 3, 2009 #

  15. I really enjoyed the teaser! Congrats, can’t wait to read.

    Comment by Debbie Cairo — December 4, 2009 #

  16. Oh I love excerpts! Thanks for sharing and congrats on the release. :)

    Comment by LaurenMurphy — December 6, 2009 #

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